Fic rantings
Jun. 14th, 2005 01:56 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
burntcopperSpecifically, as recently found in SG:A fandom.
Mckay and Sheppard snark. It's what they do. Adding 'Aliens made us get married for trade purposes' (which, er, is actually quite feasible and encouraged, because it induces immense amounts of snark and team members taking the piss out the pair) and on top of that, aphrodisiacs, is all well and good. As is denial after sex and freaking out. Twice. And Mckay pointing out that Sheppard's been flirting with him for months. All of this is well and good and should be encouraged.
HOWEVER. At the end of the fic, there was suddenly 'sex means I love you' and sobbing and 'oh my god you complete me' and WEEPING. Weeping. For god's sake, did you suddenly transplant their personalities for the last four paragraphs? How you go from snark, denial, and not one single solitary thought about angst or attraction to 'you complete me' is fucking beyond me.
:stab stab stabbity stab:
Mckay and Sheppard snark. It's what they do. Adding 'Aliens made us get married for trade purposes' (which, er, is actually quite feasible and encouraged, because it induces immense amounts of snark and team members taking the piss out the pair) and on top of that, aphrodisiacs, is all well and good. As is denial after sex and freaking out. Twice. And Mckay pointing out that Sheppard's been flirting with him for months. All of this is well and good and should be encouraged.
HOWEVER. At the end of the fic, there was suddenly 'sex means I love you' and sobbing and 'oh my god you complete me' and WEEPING. Weeping. For god's sake, did you suddenly transplant their personalities for the last four paragraphs? How you go from snark, denial, and not one single solitary thought about angst or attraction to 'you complete me' is fucking beyond me.
:stab stab stabbity stab:
