Glozelle is very awesome. And I'm a sucker for POV fic. especially POV fic where the person doesn't have all the facts. You could see him rolling his eyes so hard in some scenes.
In the books it states that Edmund and Peter are coming off as adults, and when you've got the Pevensies standing in front of you, with their body language, experience and everything, there is no way you'd believe they were only 15-16. As for first thoughts... well, the boys are the ones known for rep of warriors, and it's bloody difficult finding a young woman who can shoot like Susan and Lucy are supposed to have in the legends.
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Date: 2010-05-04 11:16 pm (UTC)In the books it states that Edmund and Peter are coming off as adults, and when you've got the Pevensies standing in front of you, with their body language, experience and everything, there is no way you'd believe they were only 15-16. As for first thoughts... well, the boys are the ones known for rep of warriors, and it's bloody difficult finding a young woman who can shoot like Susan and Lucy are supposed to have in the legends.