May. 24th, 2011

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It has been pointed out by certain people that the Eagle Dance AU has no plot. And needs one. I have scenes but no plot and therefore the fic really goes nowhere. :headdesk: As they're different companies, different disciplines, there's no competition/workplace embarassment. As said certain people put it, you need some sort of conflict. or at least a resolution. There is none. :headdesk: So far I've got boys meet in club, boys shag, boys run into each other, mates take the piss... and that's it. with possible exchanging of phone numbers. I have no idea what to do next. the only other thing coming up is the time limit 2 weeks period Marcus' company is in town. Poking it and wondering if they'd work better as flashback scenes, but then I'd need another story on top've that and... argh.

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