why can't someone else write this for me?
Sep. 9th, 2008 01:09 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
burntcopperfeeling vaguely dead. yay.
poking the narnia fic with its notes from Lucy the beta. fight scene in Korea is being an utter *arse*. I'm seriously considering cutting out all the action, but that would mean that the scene after would be tell not show... Also need to chuck it back at her and ask whether it would be better split into three separate fics.
Ah, personal little universes. what fun. And dammit, why can't other writers be writing what happens to Edmund and Peter when they grow up in the real world so I don't have to? Or if they do, they just write random civvy street stuff. Why did I have to be the only person who thought about the fact that they'd have to do National Service?
:muses: maybe they have but it lurks on the pit o' voles, and I have standards about which parts of t'interweb I go near...
poking the narnia fic with its notes from Lucy the beta. fight scene in Korea is being an utter *arse*. I'm seriously considering cutting out all the action, but that would mean that the scene after would be tell not show... Also need to chuck it back at her and ask whether it would be better split into three separate fics.
Ah, personal little universes. what fun. And dammit, why can't other writers be writing what happens to Edmund and Peter when they grow up in the real world so I don't have to? Or if they do, they just write random civvy street stuff. Why did I have to be the only person who thought about the fact that they'd have to do National Service?
:muses: maybe they have but it lurks on the pit o' voles, and I have standards about which parts of t'interweb I go near...
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Date: 2008-09-09 10:22 pm (UTC)The main problem with this sodding fight scene is it appears to be sodding mechanical and so reads really bloody badly.